She believes…
She sees no face to contemplate, but
She believes…
She has no hand to hold, but
She believes…
She has no arms to hold her when she cries, but
She believes…
She has only a voice to hear from a distant place, but
She believes…
She makes love only with her mind and words, but
She believes…
She will never touch or kiss his lips, but
She believes…
She knows only the image she creates of him, but
She believes…
She loves the faceless man with all her heart, because
She believes…
A contest entry
- GIVE ME YOUR BEST by Mila7.
600 points, ended March 24, 60 entries
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I live this emotion. Very nice. Very simple and yet for me very profound. Stay out of my head. Lol
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they say faith is when there is no evidence yet you believe... and I read these words through your poem
this hit true to me as well. I have felt all these feelings as well.
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hahaha sorry I mean is I can relate to your poem. Or I could / can (i can't make up my mind) ergo "somewhat true to me."
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Interesting...
beyond words... this speaks somewhat true to me. -
very well written
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Wow, this gives a whole other dimension to what I pictured. Outstanding writing, yes. But I feel like I have been invited in to watch this magical and tragic love story be told before our eyes.
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wow, i loved this, it is so breath taking and i usually dont like these types of poems but i absolutely loved this one. you done an amazing job. i must say you are very very gifted in the art of poetry. wonderful work. great great great poem.
~lexie
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