I am a dormant marker on a double helix
that has, as of yet, not been looked at
nor called upon to awaken
with but a blink of divinity's eye.
A celestial child still maturing
in the daisy chain, of the human g-nome.
How long until it’s my turn
to shine with the mind of God?
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http://risachantag.deviantart.com/art/Original-My-Universe-41053004
Prompt: Like a bead on a necklace (Free Write)
Not to be used in title or poem
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A question I think we can all ask in this day and age.
You have taken this prompt seriously and handled it well.
nor called upon to awaken with but a blink of divinities eye.
divinity's eye I think it might be instead.
Celestial Impatience is and excellent title. I loved it. This one makes you think and the image is almost eerie yet is compelling to the meat of your poem.
All in all a very good presentation. Thank you for a lovely entry. Best of luck in the judging. ~Pamela
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This is a very creative take on the prompt. I dont think I could have came up with it. Well done
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This leaves me with mixed feelings. Would any child really want that, or any grownup really?
Just a thought. It's a though provoking piece.
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Very nice. I love the picture.. it made me laugh but then I looked at the poem and it has me in some deep thought. Great work. Good luck in the contest. kahy
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Who can shine with the mind of God but God himself? Wouldn't the world be lovely if we could though? I really like this write a lot. Great use of vocabulary. I guess people that don't know what the double helix is will ask ...
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