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Light Through Darkness

While opposites in principal,
The one cannot exist without the other.
Would we even know what light is,
If it weren't for the darkness that ensues it?

With every passing minute,
Delving deeper into darkness,
The memory of light drifts further,
Further into memory.

And yet, with every passing second,
Our yearning for the light grows stronger.
Darkness; you've made light,
Created the beauty for which I long.

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  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    March 19

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    Thank you for your entry

    Well this seems to take a philosophical tone. I was looking for more abstract, but this is good. Your thoughts are well expressed, nice structure and formatting.

    I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.

    God Bless
    Tammy