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The Seventh Soul

Come
sweet sad autumn
with the turning
of leaves
and movement
from one season
to another.

Leaves change color
signifying life
and it's mercurial changes;
birth, death
and rebirth.

We wait
kindred souls
for your emergence
into the world of mortals
from the one who comprised of souls.

Praying
only for your health
but hoping you bring manhood
with your decent.

You,
the seventh soul
of your generation.

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8/2006 Waiting for the birth of a grandchild

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  • GotLilt
    July 17
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    Nice tribute to your grandchildren. I love mine more than life itself