difrences

It hurts to know,
To be diffrent,
To never be able to go with the flow

Because they don't see,
Because you are diffrent,
Becacuse they don't agree.

What dose it matter?
Black or white?
They only try to shatter,
Your dreams,
Your beliefs.

Who should care?
Red or tan?
It hurts you agree.
Yet you still go on

Welcome your b rethren,
Your more alike than you think.

Yet still so difrent,

A contest entry

50 entries- 3 winners by socialstar. 700 points, ended April 1, 2009, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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socialstar
April 1, 2009
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Very good. I like your rhyme, just felt a tad forced but very good still. Great take on the topic of discrimination. Thanks for entering and the best of luck to you. Kahy
socialstar
March 17, 2009

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#50... I want you to write a poem that Rhymes it doesn't have to be in any certain way of rhyming. Your topic is Discrimination. Go forth with this any which way you may. Don't forget to put this in your author's notes.