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think twice...

at the top
at the very summit
when youre on the climax
and can fall anytime
what does it feel like
getting all the way
running fast on the way
and when you reach there
when youre on top of the world
you realise
that you can fall off
becuse you cheated
in getting up so high
and all that you did
goes all waste
how does it feel
when you are to
full of glory
full of fame
and you grow ashamed
because you know you cheatea
you lied
and no one knows
but your conscious
inside tells you
that what you have done
is wrong,is not supposed to be
so next time you cheat
or lie or steal
or do anyhting
not meant to be
think twice
so that when you reach
on the top
when youre supposed to be famous
you can stand still on the summit
steady with pride......

Author notes

this poem has a very strong message...never cheat because even if no one knows you know that where you are is only by cheating...!

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Comments


  • mossi123
    July 3
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    good,good,goood


  • pop123
    May 8

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    Awesome I looked at it agian and I didnt even remember I'd already read it till i saw my comment. Anyway,it deserves another brilliant

  • pop123
    March 23
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    brilliant write


  • Amandainlove
    March 17
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    This was amazing.

    I can definitely tell you have strong emotion on the subject.