She walks to him, with a grin of depression
And he looks at her, his eyes filled with aggresion
She screams and shouts to him
He walks away, with a mean grin
She yells to him, why cant you love...
He walks back to her, gives her a shove
He says because, you hate and lie
He says yourthe love, that cant be won by I
She slaps him across the face
He looks at her with discrace
He walk away, not one word said
She watches him, Tears begin to shed
She runs after him, but doesnt get near
He keeps away from her, he sheds a tear
Leave me alone, he shouts
She stops deadin her tracks, she looks down, gives a pout
She turns back around, walking away
She says ina hushed tone,okay...okay
A contest entry
- Tick me off. or please me your choice. by Black Wolf.
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this is good
the word is aggression the word is spelled wrong
check discrace for the right spelling it does not look right
this peom is good I will not judge by spelling errors I like the content of your poem -
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thank you!!!
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thank you for entering this very good write, full of deep pain and sadness, you just need to add a couple of spaces between words where you have made little typo's. easily fixed. good luck in the contest with this very good write
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