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Murderer's Predicament

A trial awaits me
Before the Great Judge.

I am the bearer of disaster.
Hell breaks loose as I trudge
Down the road to my grave.

Mystery gleams in my eye,
And until my last breathe
I shall carry the secret that I
Have kept within me.

Centuries have vanished
Under the spell of my curse,
And my soul had perished,
But I won’t let go.

I am well aware
That my ruthless life
Turned to be the nightmare
Of my once-loved people.

I murdered their essence
Like a poisoned needle
Stuck to their hearts;
I shall meet my punishment
In the event of my depart.

Their broken laments
Will torture me
Until the end of time.

So don’t pray for my rest,
For I deserve no mercy,
Don’t follow my steps,
Do not revive my history.

Author notes

Word Bank: trial, hell, disaster, people, nightmare, grave, century, mystery, great, secret, vanish, history.

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  • aboomer silver member
    May 8, 2009

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    I didn't realize this was a word-bank - well done!
    I love the depth of this, nice flow and images, too.
    Nice job!


  • Wandering Woodchuck gold member
    March 17, 2009

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    Nice job on the word bank. I read the poem all the way through without thinking of the prompt. I did not realize you had chose that option til I read the AN.

    Well done. Thank you for your entry.

    Mike