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Heaven

falling

dropping

lower

into

the ground

Every step I am getting closer,
From what horrific thing of fate,
brings me here fromthat disaster.
I will not even hesitate.
PLease take Me to a better place,
I've been through so much suffering,
take me where I can see the face,
of Joseph and Mary's offspring.
A better place I am going,
A place where I'll hurt no more.
With love forever growning,
where there's no difference, Rich or Poor.

Raising

up to

a place

with streets

of gold.

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  • Riftkin gold member
    April 5
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    A nice and wonderful feeling is gotten from this. Congrats on the HM..