I stumble on a piece of wood
Crashed into the window
Broken shards fill the grass
Along with drops of crimson
.Sh*t happens.
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i like this.
a lot.
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hehe thanks
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taz, keep on ur writing
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lol thanks mix
u already commented this
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i know
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lol thanks
this poem is really weird haha no idea what i was thinking when i wrote it
i know i was chuffed how i got window and crimson to sort of rhyme lol
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wow!!! this is amazing.. taz... this is realllly different... but amazing... very well written... something really interesting too... great imagery.
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thanks :$
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