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Choices

 

 

 

Now the translucence

of the fantasy ends.  The softness

 of your whisper  dissolves in an

 opaque jolt of pain where I am left

quivering, my lungs trying to function

in the sudden void        

 

 The reality of my choice allows

 no solace.  There is no encore 

when you  deny your heart its sustenance

The truth is…no matter the reason,

 the walk into this night  is a lonely one,

 tempered by the numbing cold of an

empty soul  that had to let go of a dream

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • InvisibleMan silver member
    September 15

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    Ouch!

    Not too upbeat there girlfriend......I told you you shoulda' wore the pink thong. He never would've had a chance. :-)

    Sorry...not trying to make light of your pain......just not willing to take off the goofy glasses yet. I just moved out this week. I remembered I like your writing but you're as bad as me abouting writing all this sad stuff!

    We need to just take a couple of percosets and go with the flow.

    later my friend!


  • leo2
    March 20

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    Just a few short months ago I knew the heartache of broken dreams on a first name basis but then my life changed completely when the dream came to live with me.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long
    ps. Hang in there M'Lady. Dreams can be reborn!


    • maryannde gold member
      March 20
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      Thanks Leo, but I have a propensity to always fall for someone who from the get-go is unattainable. If I was a smart woman...Id walk the other direction from day one. Guess Im a glutton for punishment.

      I am ecstatic though that you are so happy now! I seriously can't think of anyone who is more deserving of love and happiness in his life! Hold her close and don't let a day go by where you don't show her how you feel! I pray she does the same for you.

      Hugs my friend!