crumpled blankets adorn the bed
night has just turned down
blazing like a fireball
morning sun hangs above the dry porch
laziness still engulfs the yawns
and I sit typing words
trying to make something
known as a verse!
-Neha
17th March 09
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I was wondering where have you been... it was very long slumber... Kumb karan comes into mind
... metaphors and personfication beautifully crafted...
mina
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he he he he... am glad you liked it. you know how it came about?
my cousin was at home last days & I was showing him some of my poems when he suddenly asked me to write something down immediately.. the above lines are what I wrote.
Thanks for the applause and the comment. know what your face image is very cute!
-Neha
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