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False sentiments.

False sentiments

speak slur-ly

in repetitive tones

of whiskey and beer.

26yrs of cheers

to the boys,

for us no warranty

to your pledges.

Childrens hands cover

their ears when

you come home...

And that key in the latch

stabs my heart with fear

as anxiousness attacks weakness

to the road of eggshells.

I submited to your

attitude of...

"Pick me up you bastard"

for the laughter of my

children only!

But my promise to you

i'll never break

when I tell you

that I am leaving.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    June 22

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    in repeatitive tones
    repetitive

    the write is good and addiction is a good subject. i host many contests on this topic. thank you for sharing this with me today. viyanna rosemarie


  • Cannonsfire
    March 17
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    sighs... C


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    March 17
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    Love
    Juls


  • Pure Thought silver member
    March 17
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    s


  • individuality gold member
    March 16

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    a good poem strong and direct with the message portrayed - i have a note for yopu though and as i ahve said to others in this contest - there is time to edit -

    in repeaditive tones
    - in repetitive tones


    just that opne word that i noticed thanks for entering and good luck.

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