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First Love Lost

Throbbing heart ache
And twisted fears
Your echoed voice
Is far yet near

It repeats and repeats
Inside my head
From the time I wake up
Till I go back to bed

I fell in love with you
And you just walked out
But that is what teenage love
Is all about

The ups and the downs
The late night calls
The times you feel great
And the times it just falls

The moments of love
Your first true romance
Your hugs in the hallways
And your dates at the dance

But what happens when they leave
Your love just goes away
And no more teen love
Nothing left to say

What do you do next
When your first love ends
Do you smile to your friends
And try to pretend

You're over the fellow
That made your life better
You're over him
Even though you kept his letters

You're over the goof
Over that guy
Over that idiot
Even though you still cry

I cannot denie it
You was my first true love
You are still my angel baby
Sent from up above

Even though you broke my heart
And made my world crash
You made everything wonderful
Even though it ended to fast

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  • Puppydog gold member
    July 22

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    THIS IS STRAIGHT FROM THE HEART!!!!

    Oh my! Yes indeed, the first love, the very first person you gave your heart to is not easily forgotten. Well, for those who truly cared in the first place it is not easy to move on's


  • bunchnbunch
    April 2

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    bunchnbunch

    OMG(^.^)I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!!i can totally relate to this. I've been trying to write a poem similar to this but i can't.you did an osm wonderful spectacular job.!i'm gonna print it out and out it on my binder and wall. God Bless


  • Selestial
    March 20

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    Oh hun.. this was very good. Heartfelt and to the point. Nothing ever hurts quite like your first love. Keep up the good work. *smiles*


  • DeSiBoO14
    March 17

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