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Lip read.

I know how much

you love me,

I lip-read your thoughts

when words couldn't speak,

thrown into a meditation

where our third eyes met

and each visulised our paths

that ran into one.

 

 

Euphoric auras...

waltzing in our colourful minds

as that kiss took grip of

our hearts.

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Pure Thought silver member
    March 18
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    One special kiss, will do it every time.
    Very nice...


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    March 16
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    aww this was deep.
    Thanks so much for sharing your words.

    Good luck

    Passions


  • Cannonsfire
    March 16
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    C


  • Lexie
    March 16

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    wow i love the way you spoke in this poem. you have an amazing way of saying everything in this poem and it hipnotized me some what. great job. i loved it.