Fangs dripping a blood red drop
The taste was something magnificent
You hadn't tasted anything so good
Blood dripping from your lips
Frightened people looking at you
You disappear into the darkness
As soon as you reappear you recognize the taste
The taste of the blood
You had tasted it once before
But not as the monster you are but as a human
A high scream escapes your mouth
You go back to the body you left lie
Tears form from your eyes
"I'm sorry my love," you cry," I had no idea."
At the time you sat there crying you took your own life
You did it so you could never kill again
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Such emotion, wow. It's like your taking on a life that you know and forgot about your past. Being able to get a reader to fall into the peice, and being able to imagine how the main character felt is almost immposible for alot of people. I have read alot of good poems and thi is right up there with them. Keep up the good work
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quite beautifull work tastfull and bloody good work and keep it up ^-^
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thank you....this is one of my best poems i think
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Which option is this? Its a creepy poem, but well written. Thanks for entering and best of luck.
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its going under the mythical one.....
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