I love walking in the rain,
cause then no-one knows I'm crying
a way to hide the pain
to mask my heart that's dying
I take on the tears of all
and bask in the gloomy night
oh, when the rain does fall
so others may partake in the light
Author notes
Promt #4
I love walking in the rain,
cause then no-one knows im crying
Spock
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This is so sad. I like the tone in it, a beautiful poem.
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very imaginative
simple yet deep and perfect for the prompt- I love the title!
Wonderful write full of hidden gems of meaning and messages
Thankyou for sharing
RareFlower
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That was so awesome! At first I read it and had no idea what you were talking about, but then after I thought about it I realized that your message is so true. Very inspiring, great write
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Umm... that was the prompt... i haven't written anything yet.
well... now i have... but that's okay. -
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Oh...well...it was still inspiring!
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