i lay awake at night
as the voice in my head screams
i haven't slept in days
cuz my past still haunts my dreams
my tears are words
which the heart can't say
i'm so tired, i wish
my pain would go away
i lay here alone
in side i'm dying
and i wonder if
i'll ever stop crying...
Author notes
2. tears are words which the heart cant say
A contest entry
- CONTEST '' TEARS'' by RareFlower.
700 points, ended March 25, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow that reminds me of my self 2 years ago
really good write though -
A heartfelt write, one i can relate to an extent
especially the first part. Wonderfully penned
All the best to you in the contest
Ken
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What a way to let it flow. Its deep and passionate very well done. Good luck.
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oh my gosh. WOW. totally agree with this, good job expressing it. It is so simple but yet hits with many people on a personal level. Good job!
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forgot to applaud in the first comment
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This is very deep. A great write, it tells people what it's about without straight out saying it. That takes talent. Peace.
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Oky....wow is almost all that I have to say. This is an amazing write. Somedays I know how you feel. I really lobe this. Makes me a bit sad, but I still love it.
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sad
great expression of the feeling of losing love-the numbness and the despair- to the point that you cant even speak.. such sadness in your words. great job and thanks for sharing with us all.
RareFlower
Good luck
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i like this. and i love the rhyming in it. i didnt expect the rhyme scheme to be so awsome. and i like what its about. i can realate. wonderful write!i really am very impressed with this one.
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