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Change is in the air.

The pain will fade,
The scars will last,
The darkness fading at last.
I see the light at the end of my long tunnel.
At times it seems to be so faint that I can barley see it at all.
The days have passed and now,
The sun rising so fast,
The last leaf on the tree fell long ago,
Now spring is here to in sight.
People have changed and I grew up.
At times it all comes back and my bright tunnel crumbles
on top of me, the ground crumbles beneath me and my sky darkens.
It now fades much faster now.
the emotional scars will last,
I now see the light at the end of my tunnel at last.

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  • This is really good! I think that the last three or so lines are very well writen. I like this poem! It's a good write.