dry your eyes.
dry your eyes now dont shed a tear,for you win some you lose some so dont fear.
dry your eyes and submit to strength for tears are strong
so be wise and proud up where you belong not in tormented thought of what was or youve lost for lifes full of more ups and downs at what cost?
dry your eyes for tears wont change destiny the quest we chose for ourselves remain so dry your eyes at least hide the pain be a little vain.
dry your thoughts and your heart for tears and fears will never be apart and tomorows when the real stuff can start so dry your pretty naive eyes then this world can carry on this upsetment of all and you can stay tall for youve already fell its big fall same as humpty off that great big wall thats life afterall so dry your eyesxx
A contest entry
- CONTEST '' TEARS'' by RareFlower.
700 points, ended March 25, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
so what do ya reckon for a newcomer honesty please ?
Comments
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such strong wording
I love the style- it made the message strong. full of hope and healing. I love the undertones. thanks for sharing with us all and good luck in the contest
RareFlower


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ignorant people

