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Hear My Tears

Cloaked in a blanket of disappointment...

Gazinging into the eyes,
    the windows to the soul,
            that held my heart...

Trying to keep woven the rope of love,
    that tied us together....

Those beautiful eyes can't hear what I'm saying
    as the knot is slowly slipping...

Feel the tears upon your lips...
    they are not sad,
      they are the words my heart is unable to utter!

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  • glenn shannon silver member
    May 21

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    no wonder gold that simply stunning you melt my heart with that and im a stone heart .. well i make out to be. truly priceless piece Donna


  • Nickelspring gold member
    March 17
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    A lovely and sad take on the prompt. I love the way you write.
    Best of wishes,
    KW~


  • RareFlower
    March 17

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    Poignant

    such imagery and emotion is woven through your words. Every word is a breath of tragedy and longing. I can feel my tears slipping from my eyes.
    Lovely
    Welldone
    RareFlower
    and good luck


  • Nymphetemine
    March 16
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    OMG.. what can I say.... Beautiful? Sad? Heart-wrenching.. I just loved it....My dear poet your words touched my soul.. You need no inspiration you are so talented and have a way of writing that speaks of pain, life.. I wish you well in the contest, good luck ...I bow in the pressence of your talent..
    Love and Light AngelofLight

    • LovingPhoenix
      March 16
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      You are way too generous with your comments! You have helped me so much by helping me to think outside the box!

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