Undisclosed feelings too painful to express
For fear of retritution.
They preach a doctrine of hate and fear.
She should have been free now but life has overtaken her..
She dreams of a lover that would take her
Ravage her..
Disclose her darkest secrets
or uncalculated lust purrs like a wild cat
She dreams of a lover that would tear her apart
Incredulous dreamer..
I could take her now with no pretence of love in my soul.
Watching and waiting from dark shadowed room.
Should I make the dream come true or stand here staring at her
licentiously full of wonton pleasures yet to explore?
No,
I think she is mine this night to have and to hold for all eternity.
Standing by her bed she sleeps and dreams of me
Her darkest fantasy.
Oh the pleasure that I will have right now.
My tears falling to lips unkissed.
And now I must leave you
my pleasure awaits.....
Author notes
Option 3
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Comments
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evocative with great imagery
a completely wanton peom of lusta nd longing. painted vividly with exquisite wording. I love the use of the prompt line in the poem itself. well done
RareFlower
GOOD LUCK!
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Such an interesting take on the prompt....
I know not what to say, dear poet.
You're good!
KW~
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WOW
this one has my head spinning this morning, great piece
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I love the way you intertwined the prompt! You have such a way of making a fantasy world feel so real!!!
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