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I miss the days

I miss the days
when everything was okay.
Nothing was wrong,
nothing would change.

I miss the days
when I'd come home, full of smiles
thinking nothing could go wrong
now there's piles and piles.

I miss everything,
my old house, my old life.
Just when everything was good,
it became a strife.

I miss
those good days.
when everything was alright,
and life wasn't a maze.

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  • x.Faded-Rainbow.x
    March 16, 2009

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    "I miss the days
    when everything was okay.
    Nothing was wrong,
    nothing would change.

    I miss the days
    when I'd come home, full of smiles
    thinking nothing could go wrong
    now there's piles and piles."

    I miss this too!!

    Great write! .x.x.