YOU
CAN'T
HELP
THAT...
I just don't get it.
What were those words -
those gentle, soothing words?
What were those simple afternoons -
simply... together?
It doesn't make sense.
Before you there was darkness,
and after there was
confusion.
And inbetween there was that silver flash
that moment of lightning - of brightness.
And now?
Now, I just want to
get out...
of this tangled mess of lies and promises.
It's a vicious circle:
Running - Tripping - Falling
Hurting - Confused - Running
again.
I'm
broken.
It's crazy.
It's mad.
I can't be here -
with you.
...WE'RE
ALL
MAD
HERE.
Author notes
Will write as soon as I get the chance 
Thanks for putting me on the list
~Paradox
A contest entry
- Favorites Only ( Prompts Galore ) by HereComesTheSun.
550 points, ended March 29, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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happy silverness! i is proud of yous!
mad... is me. iloveyou. i will critique in a little while, as i am currently listening to some music and being aannoyed by small children. who, i might add, are READING OVER MY SHOULDER!!! (johnny...)
(my cuz)
plus, i kinda had 2 skim b/c hes ten and it was a bit over his head... so i'll comment later, k?
love 4 u!
my02u
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wow, one of the best writes in the contest i mean your style with this really fit alice in wonderland and you really just brought a new style and made yourself very unique. great work :]
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Thank you It was a great contest, by the way. I loved all of the prompts
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awesome
it is so simple.....i luv it! -
alice is all yours
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