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Plastered to the sky

I see sky colored sheets
smothering me,
rainbow eyes glaring
..
fiercely

people screaming
wrists bleeding
restraints taring
(away)
at soft flesh.

I'm made from glue and pretty paper,
scattered with glitter
and letting off a seductive vapor.

He's made of wet dingy cardboard
scattered with muddy scars
and smelling of multiple midnight bars

strapped down hard
fingered like a guitar
making music for all those stars.

I see sky colored flecks
falling on me
hallow eyes gleaming
..
monstrously.

people yelling,
completely ignoring
as he takes away,

another piece of me.

I'm made from glue that's come undone
with layers of clothes
at multiple midnight shows.

strapped down hard
played strong and harsh
screaming music for the demanding crowds.

and as he plays his fingers to the bone,
I can see me disappearing
magically,
the very last little pieces
he's taken from me.

Author notes

Well, I'm not 100% sure where this came from. Ultimately it's about me feeling robbed of life...Robbed of happy experiences.
he doesn't realize how much he drains me. I wish I knew exactly what to do with him. I don't know how to let him go, but I need to.

I just don't know if I want to.
I deserve all this darkness.

I HATE the ending. I just suck at finishing lines.
And the title, I just can't think of anything better.

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