Is it anything I need more than this write to you my beloved?
Any alcohol, drug or even sex can’t replace the real delight
Of my connection here mind to mind
I just have a little hope that you read me
And it’s good for your ear
To hear my thoughts to stay here
So bared I am with them
So confusing or repeating sometimes
They will be never so beautiful
As all sweet signs of your presence
Beside me
But I need them to live
and to feel you here
A contest entry
- Alcoholism by individuality.
550 points, ended March 16, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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So true..sometimes we all need the feelings of the love..and this makes us more satisfied then anything else..well thought work of the love poetry..
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a good take on the topic, using addiction as the theme, aye whatever we use, it controls us at times, and we need an escape so we can gether our skirts/thoughts. thanks for entering, good luck.
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wow
I'm so surprised and honoured, thank you so much
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