My partner needs to let me be me
To truly love me like no one else can
He must be gentle, loving and kind
The key to my heart I will give this man
He must be thoughtful, honest and true
We will share our mutual respect
My best friend and lover like no other
My delicate heart he’ll never neglect
I will trust him to not break my heart
Not easy since it’s been broken before
He must be faithful, true only to me
I will pray not to be hurt anymore
I want a man who will be my best friend
To comfort me in my times of sorrow
To listen with his heart when I am sad
He will give me hope for my tomorrow
He will dry my tears if I should cry
And tell me everything will be alright
This man will make my dreams come true
Reaching for me in the middle of the night
His desire for me will be never ending
Forever in my arms and all my sensuality
I’ll make all his dreams and fantasies come true
Then only will our hearts be one for all eternity
Author notes
By: doolie
Background ~ By Little Eagle
Contest for Cathy Davis ~ Family Is Everything ~ I would love to be your sister
Contest ~ What you really and truly want in a partner
[Silver Trophy]
In a list
A contest entry
- What Do You Really Want by JeannieD Hunter.
1000 points, ended March 23, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - {contest #229} (AP) Family is everything by daviscth.
1750 points, ended June 11, 24 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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So so beautiful and says about what I would say if I had to. Understanding of others needs and wants can lead to a wonderful life together as I have with my loving JJ. He is my best friend forever. I know aslo that Maxboy is your best friend and you have a wonderful marriage. Partnerships like that bring out the greatest creativity in people as it has in you with this one. Congrats on your honourable win. Sorry for not popping by but have been sick for a while and am only now starting to catch up with everyone.
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Thank you so much hon. We are lucky to have are best friends as husbands. I'm glad to hear that your feeling better. Maxboy hasn't been on AP much the last month or so. He's been working on other things around here. I've been working mainly on the background and tags. I seem to be better at that then I'm am at writing, LOL!!! It's nice to have you back.
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excellent~
Beautiful sis..and I have to agree heart touching as well
Congrats on the Honorable Mention
I have up a new one hope you drop by
Hugs
Your sis
Susan~~~
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Your poem is lovely and so heart touching! I can tell this is really how you feel because the emotion is running off my screen right now.
Thanks so much for sharing this and congratulations on the silver cup.
I'd be honored to have you as my sister.
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Thank you, Sis, for the honorable mention. I'm so happy that we are truely a family now.
Hugs & Kisses
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Aw, thank you Cathy. I seem to write from my heart and I guess it shows. Thanks for the lovely comment and I'd be honored to have you as my sister, too.
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I really loved that you have an amazing poem here it is aweinspiring.
The Positives:
very romatic and kinda sensual I really loved reading this
Room For Improvement:
Nothing I can see you did wonderful
My Favorite Part:
I will trust him to not break my heart
Not easy since it’s been broken before
He must be faithful, true only to me
I will pray not to be hurt anymore
Its hard to give trust in someone isn't it
Overall:
I give this an 8/10 you did great. I hope to see you in my future contests thanks so much for entering.
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I'm happy that you enjoyed my write. Yes it is hard to give your trust when you've been hurt by someone before. I beleive that trust has to be earned. I'll be sure to watch out for your future contests.
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Stunning !!
Beautifully expressed !! A most charming write
A pleasure & delight to read thank you !!
Best wishes ! Friend Easy
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Thank you Easy for your wonderful comment and applause. I appreciate you taking the time to read my write. I'm so happy that you enjoyed it.
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I love your poem, and the back ground. Innocence and the truth. Very beautiful.
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Thank you Rheea for dropping by to read my write. I really appreciate your wonderful comment and applause. I'm so happy that you enjoyed my write.
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I love this. It's so full of love and hope and happiness... It's brilliant! And different from most other entries in my contest so it really stands out for me. I love it!
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment. I'm so happy that you enjoyed my write.
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this was very gorgeous and sweet. normally I'm not a fan of rhyming, so it distracted a little from the story for me, but really, I liked this. thank you for entering.
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Thank you for your wonderful comment.
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excellent~
This is beautiful.............
I can tell you penned this one from your heart
Congrats on the Silver Trophy well deserved
Love the background too
Hugs
Your lil sis
Susan~~~
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Aw, thank you Susan for your lovely comment. I do write straight from my heart.
I'm so happy that you enjoyed my write, sweet sis.
Hugs,
Your big sis
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This is so beautiful! i swoon!
you penned a beauty here my dear friend I love your heart!
Blessings
Rend
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Thank you so much Rend for your beautiful comment. You warm my heart with your kind words.
Take care my friend.
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this is what women say they want but I find in their actions that they do not want what they say they want. good poem though.
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Thank you very much for your comment. I don't know what other women want, I can only speak from my heart. I'm pleased that you enjoyed my write.
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I loved this poem and your take on what you want. Thank you for entering it was an enjoyable read.
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment. I'm glad that you enjoyed my write.
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Bravo! This is what I had hoped for from this contest. I like that you included what you will give as well. Thank you for entering and good luck!
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WOW!!! Thank you so much for the silver trophy. I'm so happy that you enjoyed my write.
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Beautiful write sweetie, let me try to live up to them.
Love Ya....Best wishes in the contest
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Thank you sweetheart. My heart belongs to you.
Love you too.
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I love this from you hon and I enjoyed reading! I see a shiny on this one Great Job!!!
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Thank you sweetie, It comes straight from my heart. Your kind words have put a smile on my face.
I appreciate your kind words and all the encouragement that you send my way.
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