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my smiling soldier

For the man who loves to smile
there is no greater gift to give
than a forever smile
from one who holds him dear

A hundred miles away
yet right here in our hearts
we miss you so much
yet we can't show you!

Words are never enough
pictures make us cry
yet I'm going to try anyway
to show you that I love you.

My hero in all ways
my hero, you are forever
I love to make you smile
can't wait to see you home!

Long nights up playing games
early mornings off to work,
yet never complaining
when we know you must hurt

for the soldier who loves to smile
I hope this brightens your day
for there is no better way to show you
that I love and miss you

Author notes

this is for Rett, he is currently in afganistan serving his country. I miss him soo much!!
He comes home in august and i cant wait. he is MY HERO.

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  • Eusebius
    March 16

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    For our troops who do so much and suffer, and in this case one particular one...this is a most heartfelt and poignant piece of verse and you have done a most splendid job here! I am certain that he will touched by your love and concern!


  • PureRomance
    March 16
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    This is a very beautiful poem in dedication to Rett. I'll keep him in my prayers. I'm glad he's such a hero to you. This was really well written and inspired with great worth. Great job with this brilliant masterpiece. God bless you always and keep up the excellent work.