Stars over the empire,
Standing with a midnight fire-
Moves that kill
Lips that spill
Arms that shake
And The love that we make
Eyes that stare
Please make me care
Where will I go my love?
When your not there
Tangled in sweet catastrophe,
Trying to remember who I used to be
These days I don’t know
When im upset I glow
Get mad and up I go
O darling save my mind!
I’m sorry I haven’t been kind
Were in motion now,
I regret I cant rewind
Stay on the same page
What if I do change?
Stop drinking to have fun
And smoking to calm down
In a sea of sin I drown
Its sad to be the clown
What did you think
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- this made me think of " hey sexy lady, can i get ya number" that little song tht goes with that tune
dont ask me why. im sure thats not the reaction you were going for.
but none the less. i like this write.
I’m sorry I haven’t been kind
Were in motion now,
I regret I cant rewind
Stay on the same page
What if I do change?
- i liked those lines. i think the ending could be stronger though
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thank you! I think I might try to fix this poem up a little better.
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