Almost four years since I had my last drink
no longer do I puke in the kitchen sink
damage control has been working overtime.
The feeling of serenity and peace is sublime
hurt and pain no longer have a hold on me
each and every day praying to be kept free.
Wisdom is slow coming, yet come it will,
inside where it counts, it's quite a thrill
some days are better than others it seems
destructive actions always part of the scenes
only with God's help do I make it through
make the decision today, let Him help you.
Taking away the craving, the anger, the fear
ongoing feelings when you can't see clear.
Killing with kindness is our motto now
no mind altering substances will we allow
one day at a time we fight for our life
wriggling away from all drama and strife.
Tough it is indeed, to fill an unquenchable thirst
His love filling us fully dispels that curse
end result of indulging, our last ride is a Hearse.
Despite all we have done, questionable and the bad
inside we at last feel good now, no longer sad
fellowship with others that understand
family and friends, again lend a hand
excitement to once again face the trials of the day
reality is so much better when you're not drunk
each day a blessing I don't wake up blowing chunks
no aspirin every morning to chase headaches away
come join us won't you? we have a blast
exhume those alcoholic ghosts, let go the past.
Author notes
Griswold
Love you Tory.
This finishes Series 1 of the Acrostic Serenity Prayer series.
Now I get to start all over again... 
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A contest entry
- Alcoholism by individuality.
550 points, ended March 16, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - If I D/Q'd you because you were anonymized i am SOOOOO sorry/ please enter as prewrite./ all will be applauded as i am a stupid idiot and thought someone was being a smart aleck by Viyanna Rosemarie.
6700 points, ended April 1, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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'grats on the Gold and Silver!
thought provoking piece;
raw and honest, as with all your recovery writes, this allows the reader a glimpse into the life of recovery and what good things can come from
"we have a blast
exhume those alcoholic ghosts, let go the past." --> the ending seems a little ... rushed; 'let go of the past' reads just a little better
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Scott, thank you for sharing such a personal thing. I'm glad you found this courage and strength. I'm glad youre here and I got to have you as a friend.
Alcoholism isn't a strnger to me, though it's never touched me this personally. My sister was married to an alcoholic and I saw them both struggle with it every day. My grandfather was an alcoholic, although to me, it was just how grandpa behaved.
Your poem gives me a little more insight into how someone with a drinking problem feels. What they go through in their struggle to be sober. I know it's a constant battle, but in my opinion one well worth fighting.
I wonder if you shared this with your area AA? I think this may be helpful in helping others to come to terms with their problem and find the strength to reach inside and make the right choices.
I'm proud of you.
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Yes, definately worth posting. I'm surprised that you only got the silver in the other contest. Awesome, and you described Alcoholism very well. I'm glad you've made it this far. Good luck to you in all you do.
Vhoori
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This is such a exce;llent poem I can see why you won a silver and a gold on this one. Congratulations you earned it and I can identify with recovery very heally and God is a great help in our lives. Thank you for sharing and it was a pleasure to read.
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said just enough
for the gold
really nice read here
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A very very well earned gold and silver shiney.
Im glad you have managed to overcome your problems.
Bravo!
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A well written poem with a powerful message. I hope this reaches a lot of people. God bless.
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i am proud of you
i was dried out twenty years ago, didint drink for 2 years, now i have one now and again, problem is the clinic got me hooked on valium..been on 30ml a day ever since...lol we cant win can we can...keep happy my friend....oh.. sorry..the poem is great i dont think i would be brave enough to write with such honesty...
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excellent write. I love this series. Lots of emotions. Lots of information for those going through the same thing. Good writes. Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering these into my contest.
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This is a wonderful poem, an excellent acrostic. I am the wife of a recovering alcoholic (he's been sober 25 years now, we've been married 36), and this poem hits close to home, I enjoyed reading it and wish you all the best in your endeavors. I thank God everyday for AA.
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Congratulations on being sober, what a great poem, straight from the heart. My Daughter is an Alcoholic trying to get sober, I see what see is going through and I pray everday for her and for anyone else that is battling addiction. Great poem
Suzanne
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Thats an awesome write! And congratulations on the 4th year of being sober!
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Superb Plus
A very fine write, indeed. Reminds me of an experience which I had many years ago. I wrote about in this poem:
"Don't Drive Drunk ... Pink Elephant Ahead".
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Congrats on a very deserving win. I so related to this! Great penning from the heart and soul of someone who has been there and done that!
I too have been in the rooms for many years. My saving grace!
Blessings,
Frogz~
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forgot the applause.
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Congrats on 4 years. Picked up my 60 day chip tonight. Been in and out of the rooms for a long time...
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can i please get you to add your author name to the author notes as i really want this to be in the finals. thank you. viyanna rosemarie
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Congrats on the gold.
I love you too
Tory -
Sandcastle
Alcoholism is quite a debilating disease and it has consumed many lives. I commend and uplift those who have the courage to face this demon or any other demon that has consumed them. Keep it up, especially during these hard times, it is easy to resort to old habits. Keep strong in the Lord for His word is your lamp to see and His light will guide your path. God is always there and He will not let you down even in your darkest hour. Just call on him....call on him He will hear and He will provide just what you need. The key is to have faith, have faith in the Lord because He is your salvation. Be blessed.
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loved:
Tough it is indeed, to fill an unquenchable thirst
His love filling us fully dispels that curse
end result of indulging, our last ride is a Hearse.
it is tough indeed. its been 1 nd a half years since my last drink and its only through God that I get by. I did it cold turkey so I know its through Him. I liked your background too. love acrostic and you did it with such grace and rhyme was cool too.
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If "acrostic" wasn't in the title I never would have noticed. This is incredible! Acrostic AND rhyming? AND great flow AND it makes perfect sense! One more 'and'-- AND it has a beautiful message! Amazing. Simply and truly. Also, though, one spelling mistake: in the 24th line you put "your" instead of "you're," and then 2 lines later you put "wont" instead of "won't"... but that might've been intentional. Still, amazing. Kudos on the gold!
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Yes it was worth posting. This touched me deeply because someone I love very much is going through this. Best of luck and God be with you!
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Well written in every whichc way it flows verry nicley to. I LOVE it. Keep writting your very good at it.
~ Chelsey
Oh and congrats on the gold trouphie well desurved. -
This is a very well-executed piece of in-depth and soulful writing. Simply marvelous!! Way to go......
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oh no!...I AM BACK!!!! love the finish here...i knew it would be fantastic....congratulations on a shine, well earned...you have always been gold in my book!
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Well done my friend I am so happy for you.
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your determinatrioin earlier and now had poaid through, it flows as a silken nightie - this is the first poem with no errors noticed in spelling etc i like the themes here too god's help and at the end alcoholic ghosts, i relly love that term, this is by far the best so far here ha now others will be pissed off if they read this comment thinking the swine he nicked my cup lol oh well toughm luck in life - well done
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does this mean the series will be complete? this is tremendous...you are such a champ...i admire and respect your will and courage...i am so very proud of you...you are too good to waste away...thank you for this and all of your wonderful words of encouragement...xoxo
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cant you stay gone.
screw this
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This is absolutely amazing!!! I so enjoy reading ur poetry about how ur life has changed!!! This is so powerful and truly inspirational!!!! I love the way that you wrote this its a truly remarkable read. I love It!!!!!!
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wonderful piece of strength and courage. Let me know when your finished.
Love you
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