The Somber Sounds
Of Days that pass
Eat away at my soul
And I emerge from the ashes
Like a phoenix of new
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wow this is a very truly deep and powerful write!!!!! Your words are so well spoken and portrayed in this piece!!!!! This is such an incredible piece and the picture so so very perfect!!!!!! I love it!!!!! You have such a gift for writing You are amazing!!!!! I love this piece!!!!!!!
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new Soul
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hope you're good. just read New Soul, very very good. I love short poems that dont fuck about. Brilliant. -
perfect.
every line, every word.
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Yay *clap* this is pretty cause it has a phoenix and cause the whole reborn thing
I like the picture alot and I like that it's short because my attention span and all. "The somber Sounds of days that pass" way to be totally emo haha I still love you and your poems!
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Okay I just took a harry potter quiz so the phoenix thing I'm like hellz yeah! lol
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oh, wow, ilove the pheonix metaphore in the last few lines. it's short but very powerful
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good one
Few words but well expressed.
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good metaphor could have been expanded howev er i thought that is was very well written
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whoa where are my sunglasses lol i need them in this poem for you are blinding the words with illusion.
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omg
i hardly knew wht this means but the part i do understnd is rlly good
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wow, beautifully done
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wow i love it! very nice work :]
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Ah..what a realisation you worded here defining this love and its place in us..well done...and thank you so much for sharing it...
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Short but profound, Great write!
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LOVE IT!
Short and powerful poems are my favorite to read. When they are well written, which your work always is, it takes very few words to express something enormous and dynamic. I love it. The imagery is breathtaking.
Great write sweetheart,
take care. <33Jaymie
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Very short poem, yet so much is said. I just wish I could see the picture. It won't show for me Nice write Kels
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I love how your newest poems are extrememly short, but so full of words. It's amazing.
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Excellent work
A fantastic piece
Has a very triumphant tone to it -
Yes, that sounds like you.
A very powerful write.
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I love it ur words are so amazing!!!! This is a truly powerful piece!!! I love the way that you wrote this!!! I can truly feel the emotion in this piece!!!!
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Tres bonne!!
You know, the phoenix is one of my favorite mythical creatures.
This made me think about wanting to change myself, to become better.
i really like the simplicity of this; awesome write! =)
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This is very good kels my dear. I love the picture with it that may just end up on my body some where.
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awww i love you kelleh! I'm so glad you're writing more like this, you're amazing!
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short and sweet
talk about turning over a new leaf. Very good. short and to the point...i love the directness of it.
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