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Sacred: Diverse yet Equal

Virtues
      Morals
            Beliefs
Radiated in words and molded in deeds

Prayer
      God's Existence
                      Love
All worship is individual

Being sacred
              Holy
                  Hallowed
Unique to each culture

Allah
    Gods
          Christ
Praised and held in iron hearts

Temples
        Mosques
                Churches
All sing praises to their God

Worshippers
            Brothers and Sisters
                                  Members
All held sacred in the hands of God

We are something to Him, Allah, God
    Maybe even sacred beings
...children


Being sacred
            Holy
                  Hallowed

Author notes

Things held sacred are unique with us all. I tried to represent that in this poem. I really hope that this is good for the prompt Being Sacred. It was a difficult one for me.

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  • Umi Juvariel
    April 9

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    Great word art here. I enjoyed the flow that it created and the rhythm you have made here. Excellent write and good luck in my contest.


  • Nickelspring gold member
    March 19

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    I love what you have done with the form here. This is an interesting subject that I think you have handled well.
    KW~


  • FaerieNWonderland
    March 17

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    this is great.....
    your open-mindedness is so refreshing in this piece.....
    i love how you represent a lot of aspects of being sacred
    great piece....thank you so much for sharing

    your Faerie


    • DeadlyPoetic88
      March 18
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      Thanks that was my goal of this piece. I really didnt want to just pick what I see as sacred.


  • Jocelyn.Jaded
    March 17

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    Hmmm I like this :]]. "Being sacred
    Holy
    Hallowed
    Unique to each culture" Really like those lines. Great write.


    • DeadlyPoetic88
      March 17
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      Thanks. This was one of the toughest things to write because we all define being sacred as something different


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    March 16

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    Deadly means 'being of death, leading to death or having qualties of death'.
    Precious means important, sacred or well guarded.
    A poet is someone who writes poetry, often using poetic device.
    Therefore your prompt is...
    Being Sacred

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