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Wound in a Dress (and other related tales)

she needn't speak a greeting with her pale lips,
she waves hello with frail hips.
I imagine soft touches from thin finger tips
and kisses flavored sweetly with fresh wine sips.
when we meet we speak with sexual themes
but we're just adding fuel for that night's dreams.
something tells me she's more than she seems
pulling my strings in the grandest of schemes.

you kiss my ckeek but bite my nose
rub my feet but break my toes
in bed you moan the names of foes
you speak to me in angery tones
you care so little & my it shows
how much can I take? God only knows

Your spoken snare is set
And all the fibers reap regret
But still your malice makes me wet
As if we weren't done bleeding yet
I like it when you kiss my face
But wish your lips weren't made of mase
And though the pain makes my heart race
I doubt that you would like a taste
Now it will take some time I bet
Befor I'm able to forget
About the wretched trap you set
Which I will spring again I fret

Everyone knows you're nothing
but a wound in a dress,
too bad you won't implant a brain,
prosthetics don't impress.
Though I must confess;
you look your best,
but take away
synthetic breasts
and what the fuck is left?!
WHAT
THE FUCK
IS LEFT?!?!
You wear deception
like a perfect complexion.
Lure me in
between your thighs
to go down on your lies.
And those eyes;
they seduce.
You're body is tight
but so is your noose.

Author notes

Wound in a dress is actually only the last stanza. Each stanza is a separate poem; "Girl Across the Street" "Magnolias and Mace" and "Spoken Snare" This is just the first time I've arranged them like this; lengthening some of my notoriously short poetry.

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  • Heroesrox
    March 31

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    I like each of them. I would love to see each of them in thier own page, while you keep this one up, too.

    Very good pieces! Love them. Thanks so much!

  • mash
    March 16
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    i love it.it speaks abt wat most pple fee


  • abybaby
    March 16
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    awesome

    you kiss my ckeek but bite my nose
    rub my feet but break my toes
    in bed you moan the names of foes
    you speak to me in angery tones
    you care so little & my it shows
    how much can I take? God only knows

    loved these lines especially......good work done here mate

    cheers
    abybaby

  • DarkVamp
    March 16
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    it was AWESOME

    it was really cool u told how pretty little women can lure you in a trap