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44 4's

44 4’s

1. See I’m strapped with a 44, jacking whomever just watch me
2. Even though I got 44 times more Bill’s than Cosby
3. My rhymes heat up 44 times greater than the equator
4. At an angle of 44 degrees, caught beef my gun blew like the sky

5. With 4 shots from 4 clips, I rather see you dead now than later
6. I just ran 44 miles from the scene, I stop and breathe like I’m higher than Darth Vader
7. I walked up to a pay phone that cost .44 cents and thought why
8. I called my dad 4 times as 4 helicopters flew by

9. Finally he picked up, told him to come get me, he said it’ll be 44 minutes
10. I said never mine the 44 bus just rolled up on time
11. I ran 4 feet to the bus stop and I was the 4th person in line
12. On the bus I took 4 steps as a bum was on his 4th bottle of wine

13. Sat down next to this guy with a 44 Rick Mahorn throwback from 89’
14. Outside the window was a billboard that read 44 million die each year from hunger
15. 4 minutes and 4 seconds later, it started raining and it came with the thunder
16. 44 degrees outside, now isn’t that something

17. All of a sudden, an accident 4 blocks up, a 4 car pile up
18. The bus driver lost control, hit his brakes with 4 consecutive shots, all 4 tires just bust
19. See he was careless doing 44 in a 20 mph school zone
20. The slam of the brakes caused 4 people to hit the floor as we slid 4 feet into the light pole

21. 4 police cars came rushing while the bus driver laid mangled like he was stretched by the 4 horsemen
22. I jumped off the bus and ran down 4th street with 4 dogs on my heels
23. I looked at the time 4:40 pm, I had no time to kill
24. A mic battle tonight, 4 emcees wanted to battle this 4 time champion, this I had to fulfill

25. Tossed my 44 away into the gutter, can’t get caught with no steel
26. A squad car from the 44th precinct pulled up in front of me, jumped and said chill
27. He walked over towards me with his hand on his taser, which was set 44 times the normal voltage
28. I’m thinking yea right, but he had a paramedic look me over 4 times and gave me 4 pain pills in total

29. The total of today’s events left me weary like I haven’t slept in 44 hours
30. So I get home and shower and laid down for about 4 hours and 4 minutes
31. Than my phone rang 4 times, it was an old friend from the 4th grade
32. Telling me tonight’s battle prize is 4,400

33. And this battle is live and presented in front of  44,000
34. So I got dressed and ran passed my sister who was writing a story called “44 Acres to Blacks”
35. Outside was 4 of my boys, bumping E40 and they were all dressed in black
36. We got to the coliseum, the tickets were 44 dollars, so I had them come through the back

37. Got on stage and devoured the first emcee in 4 minutes flat with only 4 lines
38. I remember that this show is live and being televised on 44 stations
39. So for the rest of the emcees, I finish the show in 44 minutes with a standing ovation
40. I received my award, got back stage and was surrounded by 44 cops with only one thing in sight

41. I was charged for murder in the first degree and sentenced to 44 years to life
42. Up for parole in 4 years but my escape was set in 40 days and 40 nights
43. But I changed my mind and escaped on the 4th day which was 4 years ago
44. So I’m here to tell you about April 4th 2004, my experience with the 44 4’s

Author notes

Jay-Z did a song called 22 2's. Canibus did one called 33 3's. so i wanted to take a stab at it so i wrote 44 4's. now it 44 lines with the number 44 written supposedly 44 times. just another challenge to myself. to see if i can do it or not. you be the judge... By the way the sequel is called 55 5s

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  • toomysterious
    October 18

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    Truly interesting concept and it certainly kept my attention 44 times more than some poems I have read 4 times this one I only read once. Just messing with you. Keep up the good work.


  • WiseWithWordz
    October 10

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    damn it...you're killing me with 44's, 55's and the rest of the numbers...lol..loving the numbers, they're starting to add up...66'6s may hurt my mind...lol...great job my dude...i suppose i should fav you...need that hotness in my pocket...lol! well done!


  • moluv10
    March 27

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    i think you did and otstanding job with this write as well as the sequel. strait fire bro! keep it up!


  • couldbeworse
    March 24
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    liked this one too. well done.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    March 21
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    wow!

    who knows if you wrote 44.. 44times ? it was outstanding my friend


  • yesikita
    March 18
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    love it.

  • nicely done

  • wat a crazy ride down route 44, bout to get on hwy 55 before i hit the store. i'll have to get gas cuz this tank won't last, the lastleg of the trip, u guessed it, route 66.

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