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There Goes Black Eyed Susan

There goes black eyed Susan,
with pigtails in her hair.
Flowing golden locks on head
and a smile you must adore.

There goes black eyed Susan,
with her head held high.
She looks as if she is 14,
around the same as I.

There goes black eyed Susan,
she looks oh so alone.
She seems to be quite clever,
I don't think she has a home.

There goes black eyed Susan,
a friend close to my heart.
Black eyed Susan and I,
will never be apart.

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  • As the contest is soon to be over, please finish your entry so that I can judge the contest on time. :]

  • Okay, hey there. Thanks for entering!

    I'll give you three titles to choose from, so that you can be more inspired. I won't be annoyed to give you more, so please do not hesitate to ask.

    1) Five Dollar Love Affair
    2) Winter's Lovebite
    3) there goes black-eyed Susan

    GOOD LUCK!