Steam of heat,
Life you can't beat,
Sun is hot,
Look around,
Sights,
Alot!
Go explore,
As others before,
Get off your butt,
See stuff that's hot!
Don't lie,
There is alot!
Aim high,
Save a life,
Save'em from hell,
Live like christ!
A contest entry
- 30-40 words of Brilliance (PIF) by AutumnGypsy.
1100 points, ended April 4, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What does this make you think of?
Comments
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This is definately original, the thoughts are there but I see little tieing it to the prompt. Well done on your thoughts though. Best to you in the contest
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I found this kind of funny. I liked it a lot! Keep up the great job! Best wishes in the contest, my friend! Thanks for sharing!
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