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Night time

Alone every night
lying awake
and wishing I could
be by your side.
I miss you so much
My love, I truly do.

Every night spent without you
is torture and agony.
Because I can’t help
but remember that night
spent with you in your arms.
You held me close.
I could hear your heart beat.
My love, my sweet.
My world, my life
You know everything
about me, and love me still.
I know your past
and still you seem
an angel to me.
I wouldn’t change
anything about you.

Waking up that morning
the sun shining on your face
I couldn’t help but think
how lucky I was to call you my own.
You looked so sexy shirtless,
your bare arms, showing off all
that muscle. Tattoos a reflection
of us. I couldn’t help but smile.
You’re mine, all mine.
And I’m yours completely.
Soon, so soon we’ll be together
forever and we’ll be with each
other every night.

Author notes

Exciting news! Me & Wayne (LostPriest) are to be married July 24, 2010!

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  • I'm so happy for you guys!

    I read this and listening to Galopogo's by Smashing Pumpkins it kinda leaves me in a sad mood, but aside from that the imagery is great and I felt really relaxed...Loved the part about waking up beside the one you love so much...Because it's really like a painting in the morning isn't it?

    • Waking up to the one you love, it really is like painting. Just perfect. Thanks for the comment!

  • LostPriest
    March 15

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    Alas for me being without a shirt, a fortunately rare event. It was a great day though, and I like that you remember and enjoyed it as well.

    Love Muchly!

  • aww....lovely poem..!!

    Reminds me ov me and my [love] LoL.

    and congradulations!!!!!
    Best wishes to you both (^o^)

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