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Time of Passion

            Your soft skin is weeping in the golden firelight as I glide

my fingers along your glowing skin.
     All time stops as our bodies throb in exhaustion,


     As seconds turn to minutes,
     Minutes to hours.


     As time flows our passion blazes as the flames illuminate

the sweet sheen of your flesh.
     Overwhelmed once again with the wanton compulsion to

consume one another,


     As seconds turn to minutes,
     Minutes to hours.


     Drenched in the irresistible fire that will not be sated

by the passage of hours in exquisite intimacy.
     The burning desire to devour each other is

as primal as time,


     Seconds turn to minutes,
    Minutes to hours,
     Hours into Eternity.

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    March 19

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    Wow.. this was just so beautiful
    it left me completely breathless.

    I love the sensual imagery
    & such elegant choice of words.

    Loved the repitition of

    "Seconds turn to minutes,
    minutes to hours" ..

    and then the final stanza
    you added "hours to eternity"

    --That was brilliant.. and so very effective
    while reading.

    Loved this piece!!!

    Thanks for entering & best of luck


    • Infinity21
      March 19
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      Thank you so much for your appreciation of my poem. This poem is very special to me. I wrote this for my mate in celebration of a beautiful moment we shared.

  • kirmisjosh
    March 17
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    Wow!!! Hot!


  • Phallen
    March 15
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    Smmoootthhh