The best rose is a happy one.
She likes to spend days in the sun.
Her song is sweet yet never sung,
For lovers will love far too young.
As winter spills a pain like fire,
The best rose is full of desire.
She is waiting as tears are wrung,
For lovers will love far too young.
Summers gently embrace this one,
Who is dressed with colors undone.
Her song is sweet yet never sung,
For lovers will love far too young.
Author notes
This is a Kyrielle poem about love and acceptance. I hope you enjoy it. 
Sweet Jane
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i love this
its perfect and yet completely true
i would know lol
keep up the good work
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A nice poem that you have written here.
-Nam
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im loosing my desire of everything
kind of wimpish down
left nothing in me
so can't judge where your poem went
by
the poet of hearts and beautiful words
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LOVELY!!! The form is delightful and the message is so sweet. I love the flow of the words!
Thanks so much for the entry!!!
Az
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sweet
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