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You had me

It couln't have been you
You were always nice
even from the start

as the days passed
your once faithful words
kept on detiriating into nothing but lies
i began to lose trust in you

was everyword that came out of your mouth a lie
to make a fall for you?
was just all part of your plan

times up
GAME OVER
press the exit button to the right of my heart

was this all part of your plan
to make me see something that wasn't there?

it worked but not anymore

you could have had it all
my trust
my heart
my love

wasn't that good enough for you?
you just had to have had something more

what more could you want?
you had me

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  • Phallen
    March 15
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    oh, very good