wires wield worlds
like tightly tied tongues,
bandished books big brother claims,
are bad for humans heads.
ultimate union equals dictatorship -
all that shaped society scorns it
all that separates us is soul
and tightly interwoven wires.
Author notes
prompt :: wire
must start and end with the word wire.
In a list
A contest entry
- wire to wire by Peteskid.
1000 points, ended March 16, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - A contest just because I want to comment people. by AutumnsFlame.
400 points, ended May 29, 51 entries
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Comments
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GREAT statment here. I like this. Nice images. I think it was a bit too short though. It left me wanting more, and I don't know if that's a good thing or a bad thing!
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Great take on the prompt. Avoids all the right cliches.
Hope you win=] -
Such a wonderful subject and scope here, the thought of a shared desire around the world for the basic freedom...the one needed for all others..freedom of our thoughts, to express ideas. So much of the world was beneath such power and now so much less, but still a dire need and a point where we must all always being aware. Thank you for this fine entry into the contest and best of luck in the judging ...PK
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