You took my whole soul
You took my very being
You bent me
And broke me
And put me back
Together again
You wore down my sanity
You nearly broke my mind
You played me
And buried me
And pulled me out
of the pit again
You left me all in ruin
You took away my life
You made me over
Into something
And someone
I didn't recognize.
You made me happy
You made me cry
You made me sick
You told me lies...
________________
But now I have something to tell you
And you'd better listen up...
After years of tears
And silent suffering
And obsession
And depression...
I am finally free of you
I'm happy
This feels so good
I am so happy
Took a long time
But I healed
And I waited...
And he came along
And I didn't give him
A broken heart.
Author notes
Just getting the message out to a certain male-type person. I really hope he reads this, but I doubt it.
It took six years, but I got over him. And the someone new? I gave him a whole, healthy heart. He treats me like gold. I deserve it.
=)
What did you feel?
Comments
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Wow so much hatred turned from Love.
You demonstrate very graphically the nearness of these two emotions, how often does Love turn to Hate, does it ever happen the other way. Hate turned to Love. good subject for a poem?
Liked your story particularly.
After years of tears
And silent suffering
And obsession
And depression...
I am finally free of you
I'm happy
Not certain you needed the attention seeker.
But now I have something to tell you
And you'd better listen up...
But treated as an interlude, thats just fine.
Thank you.
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Wow this reminded me of an ex I once had. Excellent write and congrats on the new man
Being treated like gold is always nice
-deadly -
"I am finally free of you
I'm happy
This feels so good
I am so happy"
I'm so happy for you too.
Good write.
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