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Everything's wrong

I let it get out of control.
I should have known a long time ago..
This isn't the right thing for me.
I can't handle the lies.

A friend is never supposed to lie to you.
And now that's all that I have,
Is a bag full of lies all from you.
Now I'm lying on the floor, broken from you.

Should have ended this a long time ago.
Should have never let it get this far
Friendship is so hard to end
When it's one of the strongest feelings in my heart.

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I'm so FUCKING TIRED of being lied to all the time.
I'M DONE WITH IT.

IF YOU HAVE SOMETHING TO SAY, SAT IT TO MY FACE.
IF YOU THINK YOU NEED TO LIE TO ME THEN FUCK OFF!
I AM not ABOUT LIES.
I AM ABOUT TRUTH!

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  • james-1986
    February 4
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    a friend is someone to count on, to count on you. a quote by someon


  • speakno3vil
    March 21, 2009
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    You need a sign pinned to yourself "must keep at least 15' away.


  • skye101
    March 16, 2009

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    good write. it is full of emotion. makes me understand where you're coming from. it has a good flow to it to.


  • suziel29
    March 15, 2009

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    Thats exactly how i feel; but she is still my best friend !
    Good poem though; I really like the bit "Now im lying on the floor, broken from you" !

    Suzann x

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