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Death

Death is my only choice,
For my mistake that won't be undone.
Why did I let this happen,
Why didn't I follow my heart,
Why didn't I know it was a lie
Right from the start?

Why did he have to hurt me,
And that of my love,
Is suffering between us,
what he truly wants?
Why must he hate me?
What had I done wrong?
Why does he want to break me
Until I'm completely done?

Author notes

A poem I wrote last year about a pretty tragic thing that happened to me, so I could get over it. Lol. Hope you like it, thank you. ^_^

-XxMiyakaxX

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