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morose

Missing image

 

 

 

 

i

 

 

Was that smash inside, or out?

 

 

 

ii

 

 

My taste buds are
the only ones less aware
than I am.  They’re numb.
I am, almost.

I empty the last
of my bottle of Tia Maria
into my parched mouth.
I don’t remember who drank
the rest of it.

 

 

 

 

iii

 

 

 

I skip over the pages
that show (un)happy smiles-
I don’t understand them.
Instead, I focus on
the ones I do know,
the ones with you in them.

 

 

 

 

iv

 

 


I thought my hands
could trap the words inside
and keep the rainbows out
(but they are only good
for one of those.)

 

 

 v

 

 

 

 listen.

 

 

 

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  • Nicely done!

  • I liked this, but to be honest, it confused me. It might be that I'm tired and easily confused right now. I tried to cut the tag off a purple cow pencil bag, and my finger got in the way... But I dunno. Even though it confused me, it stilll was very good. Snickerdoodle cookies for you. You got a different kind. Sorry I ran out of chocolate chip. Great write!


  • karma-n-peace
    March 15

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    Another really great write!
    You have captured and penned your thoughts well, very deep with real emotion.
    The image adds to the artistic feel of this poem and I can see how it caused your mind to buzz with verse.

    Great poem from a talented poet!


  • a59teeth
    March 15
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    very intriguing

    i like the style you've written in here. very very nice!!!