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The Love And CAre Of Those Around.

You have helped us through what could of have been.
You made me smile when time was thin.
But I am glad that you were there for me.
Thanks to you I can now reach.
I reach out my hand to those in need.
Because of you I am forever freed.
I know that there are more of us out there.
But you are the ones who showed us the most care.
I give my all, heart, and soul.
Forever my love I shed you hold.
Please grasp it in your hands.
Know that you gave me the chance.
I thank you for all you have done.
In all of my life I see what you have become.
And thank god for your help.
You made it easier to be dealt.
You guys have made a huge impact on my life.
For now I know what is right.
I give my hopes and love to those in need.
Because I know someday that you will be free.

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I give permission for this to be sent to the Hospital. From Miranda Babcock.

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  • such a powerful piece.
    Thank you for your entry.

    Much love
    Tory

    Good luck to you