I would bring you back from Heaven
I would hold you close again
I would kiss your sweet face
I would never let you go!
Author notes
My son Adam was only 4 years old when he went to heaven in 1988, I would turn back time in a split second.
A contest entry
- If I could turn back the clock by Ken-Maverick.
650 points, ended March 18, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give Me A Reason by spiritraven.
700 points, ended May 19, 40 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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That is so sad! I'm very sorry. It's true -- the desire to turn back time.
Great write.
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What can I say
Beautiful tribute to a beautiful young man. The loss of a child is something I can relate to. Thank you for sharing and entering my contest.
Best of luck and remember it is okay to remember!!
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JUDGED!!
My sincere condolences
He is in a better place now but that doesn't make it any easier, i know
All the best to you, always
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Thank you
I know you mean well, but the best place for him to be was not sick and in my life and I will never believe any differently. But thank you for your kindness it is much appreciated!
Kristin
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All I can say is I am very sorry for your loss.I can't imagine.
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your words
mean so much, thank you so much for reading!!
Kristin
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Awwww
He is an angel now as he was in life, I am sure.
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Thank you
Yes he was.
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