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The School

She lingers in the hallway of the school she once knew well,
Watching the students pass her as they head the final bell.
Their laughter and their chatter seem a death knell to her ears,
For she knows their idle prattle holds nothing of their true fears.

They must know what, in darkness, frequents the hallways in the night,
They must feel the chill of something that they know is not quite right.
In the day they just dismiss it, not a frown will mar their face,
But when the bell rings out for home-time they are fast to leave this place.

It was the same when she was younger and walked these halls alone,
She knew that there was something inside these walls of stone.
The teachers would admonish any whispers; deemed them lies,
But there was no mistaking the fear etched in their bleak eyes.

Who was it, she now wondered, who first went missing in her class?
It was Laura, Laura Murray, whose brown hair shone like brass.
She was kind and she was funny, sun would shimmer in her hair,
And one day where she always sat now stood an empty chair.

And so it went for others through the school in every year,
One day they would be sat there and over night they’d disappear.
The teachers gave no council; the headmaster gave no speech,
Yet the students knew the school held something darker underneath.

It was her and her two friends that night that laid out careful plans,
A sketch of the school building held in childish shaking hands.
They looked in every window, tried to open every door
As the pallor of the moonlight draped them in silver velour.

It was a window, slightly open, that beckoned them ‘come in’,
So she stood on guard in darkness as her two friends crawled within.
There was no scream of terror nor was there a howl of pain,
But from the moment that they entered she ne’er saw them again.

So she followed, blind in terror, with tear stains on her face,
And could feel a pulse of evil emanating from this place.
It sank into her rigid bones and filled her heart with dread,
So turning back, leaving her friends, she closed her eyes and fled.

And in her flight it got her, though she knew not what ‘it’ could be,
A hooded face and blurring hands was all that she could see.
It flung her to the hard tiled floors and then savoured his feast,
‘Twas just a man, a human man, but worse than any beast.

She now stands upon those tiles that she has walked for years,
Feeling, knowing, living on the sense of children’s fears.
Those children who, so innocent, make he who killed her drool,
Sensing, not quite knowing, the malevolence of their school.

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  • Ami
    April 7

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    Wow that was really long but also really good
    great write
    Thank you for entering and Good luck


  • DarkShard
    March 30
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    I was shitting myself through that write, and only edgar allen poe can do that so I bow with deep respect as you rendered y speachless and totally scared and thrilled throughout your work. and send you briskly to round 2 and i beg you please do not scare me like that again. phew breathe max it wasnt real.... i have to sleep tonightyou know......
    well done a fantastic write if ever there was one.


  • jessifer1792
    March 29
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    incredible.

    This is awesome. Thanks for the veryy interesting read. I really enjoyed the style.


  • Reanna Eryn
    March 16
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    Beautiful. Just. simply. beautiful. I absolutely LOVE it. Good luck in the contest!


  • xmiasmatik
    March 15

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    great job. This is nice, and practically perfectly written. Very spooky. Great job and thanks for entering.

  • wow this amazing. I love the story you weaved. Excellent work. Good luck in the contest that you are in.. you should definitely win. kahy

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