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this might not make sense...

If no one can believe in me.
I can believe in myself.

If no one can hear me.
I'll listen to myself.

If no one loves me.
I'll love myself.

I have been broken and shattered.
It's not hard for me to deal with.

My heart can't be broken anymore.
Go ahead try.


I am my own home...

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  • xXMe17xX
    July 22

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    i love it all!!!wow nice.the last sentence..get rid. i mean th rest is BREATHTAKING.i read u are bi? maybe this poem has something to do with thta?good girl for not letting anyone bother u,ur a person!!not a robot ur feelings can be hurt too


  • hamid
    May 27
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    woow, brave. that's the spirit. Really touch my heart. Each man for himself. Great job dear.


  • i love him2012
    April 15
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    wow such raw emotion good write


  • GothicFyre
    March 15

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    Don't revise it, it's amazing as it is. I loved the way you dealt with everything that went on - a great poem.