Mothers
lost in their own love
the hearts that once beat for them
the little fingers that used to reach out
began to reach out for evil
taken in by the dark cruel world
unknowing of their fate
but the dark cruel world has an upside,
the mothers love shining a light
unconditional love to overwhelm even god
Their children will be judged
not by the darkness which stalked them
but by their mothers hearts
in which they are always beautiful
and are always safe
at the end of days
they will be the ones to live on
to help others
and to hope
for a better world
A contest entry
- The Loss Of A Child & A Grieving Mother by stavykm.
2100 points, ended March 31, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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No matter what it is shown through how a mother had to them, like raising a child on where they should go, he tried, and that shows he had a conscience and a mother that was there. Well written. Blessings.
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Just Lovely
Oh I liked this for it is different then a lot of the others. Oh yes there is nothing like a Mothers Love for her child. I loved the title and I so loved and adored my son. He was a beautiful baby and a great young boy, he grew and became a very handsome man whom also brought me great joy. He had his struggles but his heart was good. Thank you so much for your loving compassion and writing for my contest. Best wishes in the contest.
Wishing You Many Blessings,
Much Love Always,
Kelle Marie
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